Touch of love FIXED

Hi!

I just picked up my pencils and started to fix my old drawing. I know that fixing old drawing is lil doubtful but fortunately I have photos of that old drawing and I can use them when I study my progress as an artist. I liked the earlier version but when I looked it closer I saw that quality wasn´t smooth enough and I had missed middle tones pretty badly. I have drawn this drawing on Canson Bristol Smooth (I haven´t much experience of that paper) and I think that this paper is really hard concerning dark tones. There wasn´t background drawn on that old drawing and I wanted to draw it at the same time. Now I´m more satisfied with those things.

C & C are welcome as always.

Paper: Canson Bristol Smooth
Graphite: Derwent pencils